We've taken offline chapters 4 through 10 of book 1. This isn't a "we don't want to provide the service anymore!" this is a "we think that the quality of the work isn't up to par with our expectations." During our editing of even Volume 2 Chapter 1, we found ourselves running into the issue of "continuity" problems, grammar problems, cetera. To leave it online is embarrassing. We'll eventually be removing non fully edited sections of Volume 2 as well, but, to give you an idea of what I mean in quality difference. I'm leaving up the original "Chapter 1 Volume 2" and I'm going to also post this, the fully edited version.
Yes, the online version is a sounding board, but yes, it was also way too embarrassing to leave up until it's reworked.
So, here's the reworked version of Volume 2 chapter 1 (well, almost fully reworked, we're going to do one more pass).
Please inspect this version, and tell me if you think the quality is still too poor.
As soon as we finish volume 2 edits, we're going to go back and tackle volume 1. We've already done a light retackle, catching some errors, that we're going to load to the amazon store soon so they don't have to read as many mistakes, but our goal is to make a better product. Wish us luck!